New tune sketch, feedback appreciated :)

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http://home.no/nuclearfunk/Nuclear_Funk_-_Naklab.mp3

woof, hope the link works... Just a sketch to a tune I am currently making, feedback, ideas (constructive) criticism appreciated... Anything you feel you would like to say etc.

Btw. Oceanic is the tuuuuune! Twisted
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Nice drum sounds....very clear....

I like the vibra sounds too, and the little harp sounds fit lovely on top of them.

Lovely clean sounds the whole way through....the bassline when it drops is quite nice....


The break is a bit straight forward most of the way through, could maybe do with some more chopping......maybe some more cymbal sounds might vary it a bit more.....

over all though its soundin good!



Can you send me a CD of your stuff?

Beckett
Flat 2, 7 fountainville Avenue, Belfast, BT9 6AN, N.Ireland
i agree with Beckett with respect to the beats....WORK 'EM!!!

more cunning edits needed.

Also get the sounds way up in the mix they get a bit lost and therefore dynamically its a bit flat.

nice little runner tho!!
Cheers for the feedback guys! Grin

As said, its just a sketch, but you are right, the drums are a bit flat, i will work on it...

Will also try to add more elements, to get the listeners focus away fromt he fact that I have an old 566 Mhz PC with 64 mb ram to make tunes on... Oops

Will send a cd to you mate sometime when I have 5-6 tunes I am proud of Roll

Whats the adress to send to Streetbeats Blue?
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Nuclear Funk Wrote:Cheers for the feedback guys! Grin

As said, its just a sketch, but you are right, the drums are a bit flat, i will work on it...

Will also try to add more elements, to get the listeners focus away fromt he fact that I have an old 566 Mhz PC with 64 mb ram to make tunes on... Oops

Will send a cd to you mate sometime when I have 5-6 tunes I am proud of Roll

Whats the adress to send to Streetbeats Blue?


All Demos to:-

Streetbeats fao Blue
31 Vale Road
Camberley
Surrey
Gu15 3dr



look forwrds to it.... Cool
Cheers! Grin
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