Well, the subject matter is certainly of interest to me – though I don't actually read fiction along these lines. What I read is memoir, people's stories from their own lives. Fiction never really rings true to me. Very often it's just someone's idea of how things are and is consequently rather shallow and formulaic.
That doesn't mean you shouldn't pursue your storyline. For instance, as a framework for a novel about internal disorientation, writing from your own experience, you could probably make it work
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That doesn't mean you shouldn't pursue your storyline. For instance, as a framework for a novel about internal disorientation, writing from your own experience, you could probably make it work
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