Ninja Shadow_Dj-Sinister

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gday massive!
heres my latest track..
hard ninja steppin' techstep roller.. download the mp3 for proper quality.. ...........cya.............


_Ninja Shadow_

the link:


http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=316410&T=2916


have a wonderful day!~
Yo Sinister,

Intro sounds cool, Would be cool if you added more samples and maybe more melodies to the one that you have. The sound you have for that melody is pretty cool, you've got the melody played by different sounds, maybe you could use a more interesting sound to play the melody and then maybe here and there add delay or echo to it just to make it move along, I dunno...

for me I hate tracks that are like 7mins long, but thats just me...
the sound you got in the middle(5min ish) is prett cool, and then you play that melody at the intro - which is cool, maybe use it more throughout the track.

Right, maybe do more with the 2 step, I think 2 step tracks are ace, but I think the thing that seperates the good uns from the bad uns is the swing man! Make it swing, groove it up, use a different snare as well as the one's you use, the ending was pretty ok, but make the track shorter man. Try layering the kick drums, that might make it more ??? in the track. The break sounds cool at the volume you have it at, though I can't hear the work you've done to the break cos it sounds a little too low I think... try and hunt some more samples to use with it, like from a video film or something. Make the two step pattern more interesting as well. but yeah man, sounds pretty cool, my own tunes are shit, and I'm listenin to this thru crappy headphones at work. IT's hard to comment as I dunno you or your stuff that much, but I'll hear more soon!

you know, you never even asked for feedback or comments, but I 've just written all this and aint lettin it go to waste. so here ya go

32(.
Lets make d+b special for 2009!
not really my thing at all, seems like endlessly repeating gabba with the metallic 2step and the bass stabs... lacks soul you know
RhythmicNature Wrote:Yo Sinister,

Intro sounds cool, Would be cool if you added more samples and maybe more melodies to the one that you have. The sound you have for that melody is pretty cool, you've got the melody played by different sounds, maybe you could use a more interesting sound to play the melody and then maybe here and there add delay or echo to it just to make it move along, I dunno...

for me I hate tracks that are like 7mins long, but thats just me...
the sound you got in the middle(5min ish) is prett cool, and then you play that melody at the intro - which is cool, maybe use it more throughout the track.

Right, maybe do more with the 2 step, I think 2 step tracks are ace, but I think the thing that seperates the good uns from the bad uns is the swing man! Make it swing, groove it up, use a different snare as well as the one's you use, the ending was pretty ok, but make the track shorter man. Try layering the kick drums, that might make it more ??? in the track. The break sounds cool at the volume you have it at, though I can't hear the work you've done to the break cos it sounds a little too low I think... try and hunt some more samples to use with it, like from a video film or something. Make the two step pattern more interesting as well. but yeah man, sounds pretty cool, my own tunes are shit, and I'm listenin to this thru crappy headphones at work. IT's hard to comment as I dunno you or your stuff that much, but I'll hear more soon!

you know, you never even asked for feedback or comments, but I 've just written all this and aint lettin it go to waste. so here ya go

32(.


thanx mate big ups! Wink
eklmn Wrote:not really my thing at all, seems like endlessly repeating gabba with the metallic 2step and the bass stabs... lacks soul you know

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